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i knew a girl once,
with an oak heart and guarded hands
(gloved from touch)

but she
uncrossed her ankles,

let naked fingertips
touch well-read lips, and

her heart kind of turned
into ash.

i miss that girl,
with the oak heart -

she was tougher.



Thank you so much for the DD!!! Would never have expected it.
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Given 2013-09-11
Oak by ~HippieHebe is a beautiful poem with a strong impact. ( Suggested by Kida-neechan and Featured by DorianHarper )
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ActsofArt Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lovely and so well expressed congrats on the DD!
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HippieHebe Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! :)
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Sammur-amat Oct 4, 2013   General Artist
congratulations on the DD, dolly :love:
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HippieHebe Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, dear! :heart:
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flummo Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"let naked fingertips 
touch well-read lips, and 

her heart kind of turned
into ash." :heart: 


this is beautiful. congratulations on the DD! :love:
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HippieHebe Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much:heart:
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DaSh-MiEsTeR Sep 12, 2013  Student Artist
Great inspiration for words or shall I say 'lack of words' but still providing the necessary detail to influence deeeeep emotions. Wow :)
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HippieHebe Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you very much :heart:
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amrgalal7 Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully expressed :love:
And what an impact! :faint:
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HippieHebe Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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